Heart's Desire
Starting wordcount: 76,010
Current wordcount: 78,400
Current page: 183
Almost a full page of new stuff at the end of a chapter. Lucas and Gabriel are talking, and in the second draft, the chapter ended quite abruptly. I've expanded it a bit, and allowed Gabriel to admit some of the things that are going through his head right now.
It's going well. I've added almost 400 words this morning! Wow. I decided to leave the first chapter I mentioned alone; I thought it fit in well with the previous one in Michael's POV. But the one where Sarah actually rescues him might need a bit of work. We shall see.
More later.
Starting wordcount: 76,010
Current wordcount: 78,400
Current page: 183
Almost a full page of new stuff at the end of a chapter. Lucas and Gabriel are talking, and in the second draft, the chapter ended quite abruptly. I've expanded it a bit, and allowed Gabriel to admit some of the things that are going through his head right now.
It's going well. I've added almost 400 words this morning! Wow. I decided to leave the first chapter I mentioned alone; I thought it fit in well with the previous one in Michael's POV. But the one where Sarah actually rescues him might need a bit of work. We shall see.
More later.
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