I am just not all that fond of this chapter. I'm not sure why. It's kind of irritating, really, because I think this needs to happen now (or at least soon) and yet it doesn't feet right at all. Hmm. Hrmm. Grrrr.
This is the pivotal chapter, too, so it's important. Of course!
I think my problem with it is that Althea is a sociopath, and she is absolutely nutso at the moment. And I'm in her POV. That might be it. Hopefully this chapter will work, though, because I'm loathe to cut it again.
43,601 at the moment, after adding that chapter. I'm going to start the next chapter with a scene I envisioned a while ago, and it's rather sad. :(
This is the pivotal chapter, too, so it's important. Of course!
I think my problem with it is that Althea is a sociopath, and she is absolutely nutso at the moment. And I'm in her POV. That might be it. Hopefully this chapter will work, though, because I'm loathe to cut it again.
43,601 at the moment, after adding that chapter. I'm going to start the next chapter with a scene I envisioned a while ago, and it's rather sad. :(
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