More burblings about Transformation today--two more problems. Anna has no conflict other than her conflict about becoming a vampire, which isn't really the most interesting of conflicts, story-wise. And I'm going to have to figure out how to get Bear into the storyline sooner, especially if I want to salvage the chapters with his secret exposed. And I really think I need to give one of the villains a POV. Probably Connor, the vampire, Vlad's mirror, so to speak.

I do think I might have to rewrite everything, though. Argh.

But burblings are good. That means it's not wholly broken. I will continue reading.


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